Started this one over last weekend, got to the Vixen scene so far (slow reader reporting in). I like the visual style and the world-building, it's a curious twist on angels and demons, and the Biblically-accurate angels are fun to see in fiction. Wonder if there will be non-humanoid demons as well, that would be fun! The writing feels a bit careless, tbh - there are occasional typos (quick example: "You want us too?" - think it should have been "You want us to?"), and the punctuation doesn't feel consistent.
I noticed a lot of people like biblically accurate angels so I thought I'd add them in the game. As for the typos, I have no idea how I missed them, I check the script 3 times before releasing just looking for typos and I still missed a bunch of them (maybe because english is not my first language idk) . A friend pointed them out to me and I fixed them and released an updated version on December 9, so if you downloaded between 7 and 9 of December there is a chance you got the version with the typos. I might roll out one more update if I find more typos or issues.
Don't worry about it, it was my bad for publishing the game with typos.
Anyway, if you want to download again and skip to the part where you left off you can just press ctrl key until you get to the part where you left off ;)
Thank you very much! I think that's the first time i heard someone describe my art as high quality and that means a lot to me! I will hopefully update soon regarding the second episode ^^
I think you did great with all the different scenes. This was a good story, thanks for sharing :) The only gripe I have is the facial expressions, they didn't show too much emotion / reaction to the dialogue.
Thank you very much for taking the time to check out my game and give me your feedback. I'll take it into consideration when working on the upcoming epsiodes!
This is cool, I like the artstyle (it can be better tho) and is somewhat interested in the story, but there should be a nsfw warning since there's a post-sex cg in the middle of the game 😭this dept is freaky as hell (I know it's been warned from the start but the warning should be more obvious I guess).
You should probably consider marking it as nsfw since it does show tits lol, on the other hand maybe make a separate censored version so that people can play it on stream or YouTube, cuz imagine someone playing this game blind on their channel then get banned when getting to that scene lol. If this game gonna have heavy gore or sth like that in the future then make sure it's properly mentioned on the game page and at the start of the game.
Alright, thank you for the feedback. I didn't know about the censorship rules of streams because tbh I'm not online much but thank you
edit: I added all the warnings from the game on the game page as well. As for the gore, i don't think I'll add anything too extreme in the upcoming episodes, i don't like relying on these kinds of things for shock value generally, but I'll keep this in mind.
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Started this one over last weekend, got to the Vixen scene so far (slow reader reporting in). I like the visual style and the world-building, it's a curious twist on angels and demons, and the Biblically-accurate angels are fun to see in fiction. Wonder if there will be non-humanoid demons as well, that would be fun! The writing feels a bit careless, tbh - there are occasional typos (quick example: "You want us too?" - think it should have been "You want us to?"), and the punctuation doesn't feel consistent.
Hello! Thank you for playing my game!
I noticed a lot of people like biblically accurate angels so I thought I'd add them in the game. As for the typos, I have no idea how I missed them, I check the script 3 times before releasing just looking for typos and I still missed a bunch of them (maybe because english is not my first language idk) . A friend pointed them out to me and I fixed them and released an updated version on December 9, so if you downloaded between 7 and 9 of December there is a chance you got the version with the typos. I might roll out one more update if I find more typos or issues.
Gotcha! Thanks for pointing that out. My bad, then, must have downloaded the easrly version, gonna continue on the updated one.
Don't worry about it, it was my bad for publishing the game with typos.
Anyway, if you want to download again and skip to the part where you left off you can just press ctrl key until you get to the part where you left off ;)
Very high quality writing and art, looking forward to more
Thank you very much! I think that's the first time i heard someone describe my art as high quality and that means a lot to me! I will hopefully update soon regarding the second episode ^^
I think you did great with all the different scenes. This was a good story, thanks for sharing :) The only gripe I have is the facial expressions, they didn't show too much emotion / reaction to the dialogue.
Thank you very much for taking the time to check out my game and give me your feedback. I'll take it into consideration when working on the upcoming epsiodes!
This is cool, I like the artstyle (it can be better tho) and is somewhat interested in the story, but there should be a nsfw warning since there's a post-sex cg in the middle of the game 😭this dept is freaky as hell (I know it's been warned from the start but the warning should be more obvious I guess).
Oh shit, should I have marked the game as NSFW? Also how do I make the warning more obvious? Maybe make it red?
You should probably consider marking it as nsfw since it does show tits lol, on the other hand maybe make a separate censored version so that people can play it on stream or YouTube, cuz imagine someone playing this game blind on their channel then get banned when getting to that scene lol. If this game gonna have heavy gore or sth like that in the future then make sure it's properly mentioned on the game page and at the start of the game.
Alright, thank you for the feedback. I didn't know about the censorship rules of streams because tbh I'm not online much but thank you
edit: I added all the warnings from the game on the game page as well. As for the gore, i don't think I'll add anything too extreme in the upcoming episodes, i don't like relying on these kinds of things for shock value generally, but I'll keep this in mind.
The concept alone is genius, but the execution? Next level
Thank you very much!